Activities - Demonstrations of Spiritual Principles
Rate this page: Total Votes: 0 Avg Vote: 0Cinquain - Poetry Writing
Submitted Sunday, June 11, 2006
Courtesy of Ruth Breton, USA
A great activity for any Ruhi book -- ask participants to write poems about the topic you are studying using the Cinqain. This style of poetry can take any theme, even pull out words and phrases from the quotations and make very beautiful poems.
About Cinquains
Perhaps as early as in 1909, the shy and sensitive Adelaide Crapsy had read A Hundred Verses from Old Japan, William N. Porter's translations of the Hyakunin Isshu anthology and From the Eastern Sea by Yone Nogushis. In Adelaide's notebook she lists eleven tanka and eight haiku she had translated from Antholgie de la littérature japonaise des origines au XX siécle from Marcel Revon. So influenced, she developed her own poetic system which she then called cinquain.
These short, unrhymed poems consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, in five lines were related to but not copied from Japanese literary styles. Though she devised this form in 1909 - 1910, most of the fifteen poems she saved were written between 1911 and 1914. An early death at 37 from tuberculosis prevented her from exploring the genre further.
Published posthumously, in 1915, with her other works as The Complete Poems, cinquains came to be well-known only through the efforts of Carl Sandburg in his anthology, Cornhuskers, 1918 and Louis Utermeyer's Modern American Poetry, 1919.
|
Line 1: |
a one-word line, a noun, that gives the poem its title |
|
Line 2: |
two adjectives that describes what the poem is about |
|
Line 3: |
three action -ing verbs that describe something the subject of the poem does |
|
Line 4: |
a phrase that indicates a feeling related to the subject of the poem |
|
Line 5: |
a one-word line, noun, that sums about the poem is about, essentially renaming it |
Examples of Cinquains
Youth
Beautiful, inquisitive
Exploring, Developing, Growing
Movers of the world
Hope
(C. Maghzi)
Nas
Kind, Strong
Loving, Providing, Caring
A friend to all
Helper
(C. Maghzi)
Saplings
Courageous, Vital
Reviving, Ennobling, Rehabilitating
Developing the gifts innate
Heroes
(S. Ali)
Youth
Intense, Vulnerable
Exploring, Collaging, Melanging
Trying on new identities
Metamorphosis
(D. Bryant & L. Campbell)
Youth
Fearless, Noble
Striving, Teaching, Learning
Spearhead of any enterprise
Lions
(V. Ali)
Children
Happy, Joyous
Singing, Laughing, Praying
Awaiting chances to serve
Gladiators
(B. Azad)
Group
Mischievous, Loud
Yelling, Laughing, Searching
Love watching them grow
Junior Youth
(R. Breton)
Send this page to a friend

Leave a Comment - (Comments subject to approval. Your email remains private.)